I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia Ora Ethan, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
Wow, what an insightful and creative profile page about Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce. You’ve included some very interesting facts here, and I especially like your consistency in your colour pallette, sticking to the Jamaican flag colours of green, yellow, and black.
Shelly-Ann is an incredible athlete and you’re very right in that she runs as fast as a cheetah! Can you run super fast? Or do you have a different sport or athletic activity that you enjoy doing?
I would really appreciate if you could please increase the size of your text so it is a little bit bigger. This would appeal to your readers.
Kia Ora Ethan, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteWow, what an insightful and creative profile page about Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce. You’ve included some very interesting facts here, and I especially like your consistency in your colour pallette, sticking to the Jamaican flag colours of green, yellow, and black.
Shelly-Ann is an incredible athlete and you’re very right in that she runs as fast as a cheetah! Can you run super fast? Or do you have a different sport or athletic activity that you enjoy doing?
I would really appreciate if you could please increase the size of your text so it is a little bit bigger. This would appeal to your readers.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon